Voici un thriller que j'ai du faire en devoir d'anglais :


The story began with two boys and one girl who wanted to visit an old house. If the rumours were to be believed this house had the reputation that it was the last resting place of a man dead two century ago, who killed all the children, who dared to venture among him...
That’s why, in an icy night of January, the three teens went in front of the abandoned house. After be arrived they tried to enter in the glaucous house, enter in there was not so easy, although the door was not closed, she opposed a resistance like she was conscious... Inside, there was a disturbing pestilential odour, so, the teens wanted to know where this odour came and followed the odour, then they arrived in a room where was heaped up about eight dead bodies of teens with dried blood, suddenly, the girl yelled and the three rushed to the door... But, she was strangely stuck and a drawled voice appeared and said: “It was foolish of you to come here tonight...”
They could not believe their ears and the first boy said: “Don’t worry it was our imagination.” Then the voice answered: “You really should learn to do difference between imagination ... and reality...”
The second boy, the calmer or perhaps the more unconscious, whispered to the others: “Let’s everybody just calm down, shall we?” The voice interrupted the conversation and said: “So weak, so vulnerable...”
After the girl huffed to him: “The Voice is the weak one because there is probably some things we can take as weapons in this house and we will use them against the man who is hidden in this house to force him to let us get out of there, it’s up to you to decide...” So, the first boy, with fear in him, said to the voice: “The voice, we’ll make this simple for you, let us get out of there and we’ll never come here again or we will find you and hit you until you let us get out of there.” The voice answered: “Did you actually believe or were you truly naive enough to think that children stood a chance against me? You mistake my meaning, you will repose in peace on the others teens who dared to enter in my abode, you have lost, you deserve it...
The girl cried to the second boy: “I beg you, call the police, please!” So, the second boy called the police and told whole the story and said to the Voice: “The policemen are on their way.” So the Voice added darkly: “By which time I shall be gone, and you... shall be dead”.

Donnez votre avis ;)

Il est court pour la raison que j'avais une restriction de page (1 en l'occurrence) lorsque je l'ai fait. Mais je vais le compléter.

Dis, ça ne serai pas la version anglaise de ton One-Shot sur Winveo ?

Si, j'ai du la traduire en français pour le concours de la MT et celui de Winveo. :D